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It begins with a look
a heated gaze
speaking volumes
without uttering a word.

Then a sweet kiss
like dipping your toes
testing the water
Just Right.

Passion starts to fill you
the kiss deepens
becomes demanding
tongues thrust
a mimicry of what's to come.

Hands trail over bodies
fingers brushing
eliciting sighs of pleasure
breath hot exhaled.

Need drives you
Impatient, clothes removed
melted bones
slide to the floor.

Crys fill your ears
pleas for touch
taste of the heat
that fills you both.

Bodies entwined
sliding slowly
you find home
in your lover's embrace.

The rhythm rises
a primal beat
moving,
sliding,
thrusting
toward ecstasy.

The sound of flesh
meeting flesh
spurs you on
until...

The moment comes
sweet release
you feel yourself
floating though still.

Soft kisses rouse you
your lover worshipping
thanking you for your gift
speaking softly,
with a grin

"Next time, let's try the bed."
:iconngnd25:
Laura (namaste) issued a challange in her comment on another poem of mine. "sometime i'd like to see you undertake a larger-scale poem (erotic or otherwise) where you unite some of these little gem ideas into a stunning new pattern." Well, I don't know if she meant it as a dare but I took it as one.

This is the result. :D (Big Grin)

Download for proper spacing but can be read as is.
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:iconmaighdin:
Hello, i know this has been up awhile but i finally got back to this site again. i used to have an account as a different user darkvixen, but the e-mail got canceled and cant remember the password. anyways i just wanted to comment on this piece i have been reading a lot of your work and its beautiful. I would love to start writing more erotic pieces myself and if i do now it would be because you are an inspiration to do so. Thank you very much. Please continue writing it is wonderful.

~Maighdin

P.s. if you get back to this would you send a note in return, i may not be able to find this same poem again, you have so much written :)
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~ngnd25 Dec 1, 2004   Writer
*blush* thank you for the compliment. I am glad that you are enjoying my writing. And yeah, I do write alot don't I? Have no idea where the ideas come from.... I swear! *G*
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:iconlostlogic:
WOW. thats fantastic. Your very talented. A very unorigional subject, but written quite origional.

this poem created some of the most fantastic imagery ive ever gotten from a poem ;) (Wink)

im quite impressed.
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~ngnd25 Apr 24, 2002   Writer
K,

Don't worry about it. Like I said, understandable mistake...you had an instinctive reaction to thinking that someone had stole your work. Just like I had an instinctive reaction by responding in the way that I did. So...that said, let's forget about this now. *G*

ngnd25
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:iconkallista:
sorry, girl. i was a complete ass to say that, specially because i know it's not true... like i've said before, i'm very sorry for causing this mess and making you mad.

how can i redeem myself? :( (Sad)
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k :butterflytwo: (Butterfly)
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:iconnetguru:
I KNOW i commented on this is another life....very well written, sending stabs of images though my head.

eeeek, it's 2am, time for bed! LOL
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`orbital Apr 23, 2002  Professional Interface Designer
tongues thrust
a mimicry of what's to come.


I'm sorry, the way you phrased 'what's to come' almost made me fall out of my chair (laughing).
I adore it when someone adds an incredible twist on the very last line. LOVE it!

You know, I used to have this preconception that erotic poetry was like trashy romance novels.
Well, thanks to you, laura, and joy, I've been proven stupid :) (Smile)
You write so well and I'm glad you took laura's dare.

Thank you for sharing this!


-orb
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~ngnd25 Apr 23, 2002   Writer
First up...not to sound like a bitch...but....if you THINK someone ripped a deviation from you don't put a comment saying so on their work. It is a form of slander.

That said. No. I did not take your wallpaper. I never heard of you till now. I have the original image file that my image comes from on my computer. I found it while surfing an actress's fan page to get images to do a photo manip for a friend. Here is the link:

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Also I noticed that you only joined in Mar19. If you want to look through my deviations you will notice I have been using this image since FEBRUARY.

I am posting this both as a comment on my work so that others will read this and hopefully repair the damage you did and I am also sending this as a note so that you will see it.

Tanya
ngnd25

PS> I decided to check out the wallpaper that I am suppose to have ripped for my image....funny...looks like the picture with just some writing. Does that mean that anyone that uses that picture is ripping your work? Also your wallpaper was posted 4/18/02. My poem was posted 4/10/02....and as stated I had been using that image as my thumbnail since long before then. As proof that I was using it before your wallpaper was posted, wonkykitten commented on my page about the image on 4/15/02....3 days before you posted your wallpaper. Perhaps you saw my thumb and decided to make a wallpaper??? See it can cut both ways.
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:iconkallista:
um... just where did you get that image?
cuz it looks A LOT like one of my wallpapers.
i really hope you did not grab and alter it.
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k :butterflytwo: (Butterfly)
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:iconmethidox:
That was simply amazing, i love it. I love longer poems, but this one is just... it got me excited, i just wanted to keep reading to see what was ganna happen,

Simply amazing +Favs
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